留学加拿大英语考试托福写作这些词的用法你真的懂了么
加拿大留学托福考试,非母语写作很多时候=做(颅内)翻译。翻译水平越高,我们的思想就能越不打折扣地传递给接收者。但是在语言水平有限的情况下,就会闹出一些笑话而不自知。比如“有声读物”在同学们笔下会变成sound book(帮助小孩识别声音的书),而本来我们寻找的是“audio book”。加拿大托福
所以就会出现明明思路没问题(甚至很精彩),分数却迟迟提不上去。原因很简单。想象中的文章是栩栩如生有血有肉,考官看到的却是奇奇怪怪(甚至有些inappropriate)的四不像。
好在,鉴于大部分同学们的主动语料库并不是很大,可以犯错的空间也是有限的,并且很多错误是常见的。如果经常总结,可以有效地减少文章的错误提高从而language use板块的得分。经过整理,我们会发现,常错单词本身并不难(都认识),难的是用对。
我们之前整理过一批被同学们反复用错的词和短语:10个考生9个用错,这些托福写作易错词到底难在哪?10个考生9个用错,这些托福写作易错词到底难在哪?
“the”的过度使用
错误:First,accepting the criticism helps people improve their weaknesses,which makes them better in the group work.
正确:First,accepting criticism helps people improve their weaknesses,which makes them better in group work.
错误:Firstly,creating jobs for unemployed workers reduces the crime rate.To be specific,the government can offer some jobs such as carrying the block and building the infrastructures for the workers.
正确:Firstly,creating jobs for unemployed workers reduces crime rate.To be specific,the government can offer some jobs such as carrying blocks and building infrastructure for workers.
解析:上面的两个例子都是从同学们的作业当中摘抄的,在你作业中见过无数的例子不该用the的时候用了the。冠词的使用一直是中国学生的一大难点,即便是对于advanced learner来说,也经常会犯错。但是,记住一些基本的规则还是能够避免大多数的错误。The的使用主要三种情况:特指,固定搭配,专有名词。如果不属于这三种,就大胆放弃。
interested/interest/interesting
“感兴趣的科目”
错误:interested subjects
正确:subjects we are interested in/subjects that interest us
解析:interested逻辑主语是“人”。中文“感兴趣的东西”,可以用interest的动词形式:sth.interests me。
留学加拿大英语考试托福写作这些词的用法你真的懂了么
affordable
“我能买得起这辆车。”
错误:I am affordable the car.
正确:This car is affordable for me.
正确:I can afford this car.
解析:affordable本身含义包含了被动-“able to be afforded”,所以只能用来跟随可以被购买的物品,所以”I am affordable”就是把自己当成了商品……
accessible
错误:And children are more accessible to education.
正确:Education is more accessible for children./Children can access education more easily.
解析:这两个词的意思都是“容易接近的,容易获得的”,与affordable类似,用来修饰可以获得的东西。
Prefer
错误:Specifically,everyone prefers to contact open-minded and easy-going teammates.
正确:Specifically,everyone likes to contact open-minded and easy-going teammates.
解析:例句中把Prefer当作“喜欢”来使用。Prefer的字典释义里的确有“like”的意思,但是是有比较级的--“to like better or best”。当有上下文的时候,对比另一方可以省略。当时单独表示“喜欢”不能使用。
Lead to
错误:Some people who receive criticism would not like to change themselves,which leads people who give suggestions to be upset.
正确:Some people who receive criticism would not like to change themselves,which makes people who give suggestions upset.
解析:lead to当中的to是介词,所以不能跟“to do”(虽然按照中文翻译-“让某人生气”-很顺滑)。
because of vs because
错误:Because children are fast learners.
正确:This is because children are fast learners.
解析:Because不能单独引导句子,只能引导从句。
错误:We canceled our date because of the weather was terrible.
正确:We canceled our date because the weather was terrible.OR We canceled our date because of the terrible weather.
解析:because of后面不能跟句子。托福写作
Easy
“他们很容易找到工作”
错误:They are easy to find jobs.
正确:They can find jobs easily.
解析:”容易”修饰的是“找工作”这个动作而非“人”。同理,hard,difficult等词同学们经常会出现修饰错位,错因是做了点对点的翻译而忽略了英文固有的规则。